so i started working on music a couple days ago (fruity loops, lmms,etc.)
created a new NG account like a boss only for music, my first works were really crappy like this:
i basically had no concept of rhythm.
then i made some stuff that were a wee bit better (still sucks though) like so:
after people heard that i realized i had no concept of bass. 
then i experimented with some really dirty basslines and got this:
and i everything i learned together with a story about aliens attacking New York with two pieces mixed together, and made in 3 separate parts:
Hostile Takeover & Bombardment
understand ive only been making music for 2 - 3 days, give me some construct criticism please. 
BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
