Because other threads are polluted with crappy stories.
I want to see your creativity. I want you to think what would other people enjoy reading. Show the rest of us what you've got. I've always been interested what you've got going in your heads.
I'm gonna be posting the rest of my stuff here so I con't spam Random Topics.
Once upon a time, theere was a slim eagle. Everybody laughed at him. He was enraged, so he took out a Tommy gun and shot a pigeon's leg. The Pigeon died. Everyone started hurting him after that, So he shot himself. Everybody was happy, fin.
Okay then: I'm gonna switch on the other pc just for you guys 
http://www.truploader.com/view/716434 looky art!
My story:-
Synopsis:
What if the world,as we know it,was really nothing but an illusion? What if,when we stop accepting the appearances around us as reality,they cease to be reality? Join Daniel Owens,an unassuming,regular 13-year old,who is about to get his perspective of the world turned around 180 degrees in his journey which starts when he meets John Adams,a mysterious guy who seems to have the keys to the Universe in his back pocket and continually insists that everyone else does too,only that they've tied their own hands with the ropes of illusions and that once they remember that the ropes are their own creation,they'll melt before their very eyes,showing them that they had been free all the time,it was only a matter of realising it.
Here's an excerpt:
"So,really? I mean,take this wall for example,"He spoke while tapping the white-washed wall in front of him,"You're trying to say that this wall is an illusion created by me and that the moment I stop taking it as my reality,it'll cease to be so?"He shot an incredulous look towards John.
"You hit the nail on the head,i'll give you an example,have you ever seen a hypnotist perform? Have you seen the way the subject thinks he is helplessly trapped in a cellar just by the sheer power of the hypnotist's suggestion while all the audience can see is an empty stage? Now expand that stage to the whole world,and there you have the explanation for life."
"But why would people hypnotise themselves into thinking they're helpless,sad,angry,irritated,or just generally worthless?"
I was planning to expand this into a 50,000 word novel, I wrote the part till the excerpt but I don't know where to take it from there. Anybody got any ideas?
That supposed excerpt sounds like you just thought of it while typing the post. And your story sounds like the Matrix. But actually write it and then come back for perspective, input and such.
Synopsis:
Drake Camper is randomly vlogging again, as the lights go off. He tries to put them back on, but someone did cut the Power Line. He tries to open the door, but no, it wont open! It was locked from the outside! How will he ever survive?
Excerpt:
Monday, 12th June
"I have been inside here since two weeks, eating the secret stash of chocolate under my bed. I cant find a way to escape. My family does not seem like as if they would realize I am trapped in here. I tried to log on to the internet on my computer, but it wont let me. No connection. My phone has also no connection. Weird. Well, it looks like I will need to stay in here for a while, so, bye."
Drake put the camera on his bedside table, wondering what was going on. His camera was the only thing that kept him alive (Apart of his chocolate) and he did not know what to do now. So, he got pen and paper, and started writing his own Novel.
But it was quite boring, so, he did draw a cartoon, but during that, he did draw a stickman sliding under a door. Then, he had an escape idea.
Brilliant holmes! I really have been feeling a rush of blood lately so excuse my randomly ridiculous comments during today, and maybe tomorrow.
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